This is my first sprite, that I have been working on for a couple of hours. I seriously need some C&C. Tell me what I am lacking!!!! PLEASE! lol
This Is The Base
This Is An Example
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| Author: | alucard12 [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 4:19 am ] |
| Post subject: | My First Character Template |
This is my first sprite, that I have been working on for a couple of hours. I seriously need some C&C. Tell me what I am lacking!!!! PLEASE! lol This Is The Base This Is An Example
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| Author: | Anarchy [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 4:56 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
They look funny, but I like them. Armor needs some help though |
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| Author: | alucard12 [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 5:04 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
LOL, Thanks! Yeah The Armor was really a 8 minute job, but I am going to fix it up later. |
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| Author: | Mithlomion [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 7:42 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
scary shit |
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| Author: | alucard12 [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:21 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
Mithlomion wrote: scary shit LOL! That hurt my pride!!!! NEW   OLD I wish they had Imgzoom on this forum so you can see what I did, but on my base sprite I shaded around the face and connected the neck to the body, and on my example I made the helm more darker and full and I also mess with the sword. |
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| Author: | Jacob [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:32 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
Looks like a UFO. |
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| Author: | Matt [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:40 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
Looks like Rayman. |
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| Author: | alucard12 [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:41 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
LOL! and I wasn't even going for the rayman style, but It came out that way. |
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| Author: | Andrew [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:45 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
the faces scare me |
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| Author: | Tony [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:51 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
Looks constipated. |
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| Author: | alucard12 [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:54 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
Looks diffrent. (Thought I should keep the train going) |
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| Author: | Tony [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:55 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
alucard12 wrote: Looks diffrent. (Thought I should keep the train going) I thought you should improve it.. |
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| Author: | Matt [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 9:07 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
He's trying. If that's how he likes it though, then why change what he wants? |
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| Author: | alucard12 [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 9:24 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
Matt wrote: He's trying. If that's how he likes it though, then why change what he wants? Thank you Matt. This is the style that I wanted to use for my game, but I just wanted to know some tips to make it better. All I got from most of you guys were negative comments with no tips for improvements. |
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| Author: | Tony [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 9:35 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
alucard12 wrote: Matt wrote: He's trying. If that's how he likes it though, then why change what he wants? Thank you Matt. This is the style that I wanted to use for my game, but I just wanted to know some tips to make it better. All I got from most of you guys were negative comments with no tips for improvements. Tip 1 then, remove the pink color from his face. That's obviously how he looks constipated. |
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| Author: | Labmonkey [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 9:36 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
I have no idea if this might help, but maybe moves there hands up a bit, so they don't look so awkward. I know that is where they should go if you had arms, but you don't and so its hard to piece in what the hands are attached too. |
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| Author: | alucard12 [ Mon Dec 22, 2008 9:41 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
Well, the pink part was supposed to be a sign of the sprite blushing,but I will remove it and see if it works out. Okay I was kind of stuck on the hands part. Thanks for the tip. |
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| Author: | Tony [ Tue Dec 23, 2008 1:20 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
alucard12 wrote: Well, the pink part was supposed to be a sign of the sprite blushing,but I will remove it and see if it works out. Okay I was kind of stuck on the hands part. Thanks for the tip. Do an anime stlye blush 
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| Author: | Matt [ Tue Dec 23, 2008 1:23 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
Don't. Anime is for fags. |
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| Author: | Stomach Pulser [ Tue Dec 23, 2008 1:32 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
fags? |
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| Author: | redhipo [ Sat Dec 27, 2008 11:49 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
Matt wrote: Don't. Anime is for fags. dam you are like the nices person in the forums im not trying to sound sarcastic |
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| Author: | Tony [ Sun Dec 28, 2008 1:07 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My First Character Template |
redhipo wrote: Matt wrote: Don't. Anime is for fags. dam you are like the nices person in the forums im not trying to sound sarcastic Yes, he is.. /sarcasm] |
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