Mirage Source

So this is my first sprite, not completely finished yet, the green guy is going to be an orc. Any comments, thanks.


http://www.azarak.net/images/media/azarak-sprite1.gif

O_o

Personally, I don't like them. They're not bad, just, not something I would use. And your Orc looks a bit squished.

round off the arms or put a purse in its hands lol... it looks like a kid haolding a halloween candy bag, except the bag isn't there. the head looks okay though... and yes, the orc looks squished

Head is wierdly shaped.

Arms, to wide, maybe shave a pixel or two off.

Uhmm i made some little fixes so the gnome looks better:


He looked angry so i made him a little cuter xD

Thanks Vans, I will try to get the rest like that, and will also work on the ogre. I will post when I get them better and what not.